Loved the preloader games, and the humor was top-notch. However, you overused the generic Windows "smashing glass" sound effect a bit too much. There are other glass/violence sound effects out there...
if you read the creators notes I often mention how that sound effect is over-used. And I didn't know it was the generic windows one - someone sent it to me. And I re-use sound effects to keep filesize down. Thanks!
Nicely done animation, but I have to complain at the lack of storyline or meaning. He tries to buy ice cream, the ice cream workers surround him, and suddenly we're in Matrix-mode? Not makin' much sense, I'm afraid. It's a nice movie, but looks aren't everything.
Keeps getting better
It looks like this movie will appeal more to the masses than your last one. I loved the new camera angles, and the 3-dimensional dashing-through-the-trees scene was beautiful. Very nicely done, and I can't wait to see more!
Love the detail
It's apparent how much time and effort you've spent on this. I was amazed at the detail of the animation, the gore from the truck explosion, everything. Very well done. I'm a little worried, however, about your file size. If this is only a teaser, and it's 6.5 MB, then how big will your final product be? Other than that, very nice movie.
It's good to be first...
Thanks for voting, ShittyKitty!
Your experience points gave you a voting power of 5.50 votes. Your blam and protection points gave you an additional 22% of your experience power, meaning that your total vote power was worth 6.71 votes!
The more experience points you have combined with BLAM and PROTECTION points, the more your vote is worth!
You gave this entry a 5, raising its score to 5.00!
If this movie is protected you will get a PROTECTION point!
Not too bad. At least submission #190,000 will actually survive ;-)
Haha, yeah that number kinda freaked me out. I was all liek, "woah!"
One major flaw...
You need to optimize your audio. I did like your style though; it had a professional feel to it.
I love this stuff!
I was one of the first to vote on this movie! (came back later to review) I've been digging in the Portal, and if you keep this score (4.37) up, you'll be 0.13 above the #1 rated movie in the Portal. Great stuff, man!
1) I had to turn down my volume, not up...
2) Bit of a strange plot, but okay...
3) AUDIO COMPRESSION!!! For the love of God, people, compress your audio!!! 5MB for a flash is unacceptable!!! I have DSL, but I sympathize with the dialup users; I was once one myself.
it wasnt the music that made it 5 megs, but the intro movie. its 2,5 megs
You're my 2000th blam/save. The blam point that I'm getting from your movie will help promote me to Elite Guard Private First Class. The movie wasn't terrible, but it was lacking a preloader, and simple looping movies don't survive the Portal.
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